Thursday, 16 November 2017

my mark of descriptive writing

This week we had to write a descriptive text using an image as a prompt. My mark was 3b. I am very pleased with my mark, next time I will improve mine with more paragraphs. This was my descriptive writing...


It is a nice warm night in France and I am sitting with my friends on some tables. In the background are people, hoses, moon, stars, trees, and shops. The girls and I are waiting for our tea!Two of the girls are talking while the other girls are waiting nicely and so am I.

Here comes our food! Oh my it looks so yum! There is Eiffel tower cookies, A hot chocolate, a healthy salad, one bar of chocolate, a cupcake and a wrap!

Wow after that meal I am so ready for dessert and here is the menu! Oh have I told you that the girls and I are going on a trip around the world? Are you? of course you are I am just joking around with you!
THE END😛 

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